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Generic chatbots tell you you’re right even when you’re not. StoryLab teachers train AI on themselves, so it pushes back the way they do.
Sally
- Admitted to Harvard, Yale, Princeton, UPenn Wharton, and Cornell
- National YoungArts Winner with Distinction
- National History Day Winner
Sam
- Admitted to Harvard, Yale, Princeton, and Stanford
- Coached multiple students to the Ivy League and Stanford
- Worked at the Yale Admissions Office, Yale Writing Center, and Yale Economics Dept
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Whether you’re staring at a blank page or just about to submit, our AI agents push you to the story you need to tell.
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Real admissions offices use multiple readers before anything goes to committee. Your application is read by three to seven people before a decision is made. Why should it be made by one?
The opening is the strongest opening I’ve read this season. “Real Tuesday” sets the register the rest of the essay has to earn, concrete and ordinary, the kind of detail that proves you’re not performing.
Paragraph three is where it breaks. The pivot from “I kept opening the arrangement” to “what music means to me” is the moment you stop trusting the reader. Cut it. The arrangement IS the meaning, you don’t have to translate it.
First read · written before seeing Sally’s notes.
It feels personal, like how you talk. It’s advising me, not answering me. Better than ChatGPT, honestly.
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A weekly read from the coaches, not transcripts.
Hi. Here’s how it went this week.
Your daughter chose the orchestra arrangement essay as her Common App lead. The committee’s first read landed on “real Tuesday” as her strongest opening this season.
Sam and Sally disagreed on paragraph three. They settled on a sharpening revision, not a cut. We’ll see that revision next session.
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